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Jane's backfire

added by ty2 7 years ago BM

Jane was in the 2nd mile of her 10 mile travel to the sea and she had already gathered quite a large crowd behind her that was growing by the second. People from the area circled and pushed in front of her way to get a glimpse and a photo of the amazing floating mermaid but for some reason, there was no way of stopping her. There were a few who tried to stop Jane but her body would not slow down, it pushed past and carried on it's steady path towards it's destination. Jane was not able to say anything apart from her 'love for being a mermaid' and she could do nothing apart from what the voice was forcing her to do.

Jane tried to reason with the voice using her own thoughts. "Please, whoever you are, I'm begging you. Could you please let me go? I have lost everything because of this curse and I feel I have nothing to live for in the sea". Although her pleas meant nothing for the female voice "Sorry Jane but I am in control now. The more you beg or struggle, the worse I will make it for you".

"But I..." Jane tried to talk but was interrupted by a pain that had emerged from the back of her tail. She could not see and she could not understand what was happening. She had never felt this before but it felt like something was growing and was becoming attached to her.

"There, now you will think twice before trying to get out of this. You will stay a mermaid and you will like it, I promise". The voice said in sheer anger. Jane did not have to look to find out what had become of her. The crowd had shouted out about her recent change. "She's grown an extra fin" said a young woman pointing out Jane's new jagged dorsal fin as she played with it.


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