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Catching the train - becoming the train

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The terrain raced by Bart in blurry shadows as he streaked across country to answer the sound of the BART train's call. He splashed across the surface of the bay leaving steam rising in his wake. Then he dove into the ground. The City of San Francisco experienced a mild tremor, but the people went about their business or went back to sleep, they were used to such things.

The trainCatching the train - becoming the train sparked as the it switched lines on the late night run. There weren't many trains or many travelers at this time of night on this day of the week at this time of year. The engineer screamed as he saw something huge emerging from the tunnel on a collision course with his train. He sounded his horn again. Bart opened his maw impossibly huge, and devoured the train and all its occupants. The passengers joined the train's driver in screaming as darkness enveloped the train. Then hellfire erupted everywhere. The agony, the horror, the-

The train pulled into the station, and stopped. It was empty. They were still there, but they couldn't leave the train. They were ghosts or shadows or something, but they were bound to the train. They remembered their former lives, they didn't understand. The train sat at the platform with its doors closed. But no one exited. The policeman on the platform thought it was odd that no one exited the train, and the train just stood there empty. A couple of people pounded on the train shouting to let them in, and that they wanted to go home. He walked up to the engineer's cabin, and was surprised to see it was as empty as the train cars. The engineer opened the doors of the train. The stragglers climbed aboard. The policeman radioed for help. The train doors closed, and the ghost train lurched forward.


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