*first chapter ever. I'm just looking to see this story grow, and figured I'd try contributing*
Allie had a smile on her face as she saw the power she had over you. She also had the coin and at that point she... Decided that it was time to see how much further this little coin could make you change. Thinking for a minute, Allie decided to give you some options. She looks down at you and asks Wouldn't you rather just stay like this? See how the other side lives? I've always wanted an older sister after all." At that last comment you feel a tad worried with the glow coming from the coin, and the grin on her face. "What is she going to do to me?" I wonder.