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Waiting for the Right Moment

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Corey reached for your slit, but you gently pushed her hand away. "No, not now." You said.

"Why not?" Corey asked disappointedly.

"I'd rather our first time be truly special."

"What could be more special than this?" Corey asked. You whisper into her ear, softly, so the other mermaids couldn't hear. When you finished, Corey looks at you and says; "Oh, I see."

"What'd you say?" Barbara asked.

"It's a secret!" Corey said.

"C'mon, tell us!" Polly begged.

"I think we should let them have their secret." Lorelei said. "I'm sure they'll tell us when they're ready."

"You're right." Clarissa said. "For now, let's just enjoy our time!"

The mermaids continued showing you and Corey around. A nearby sunken ship was the next stop. You and Corey took some clothing and swords, and re-enacted some of your favorite pirate movie scenes as the mermaids enjoyed the show. As the afternoon waned, and evening came, the mermaids showed you a coral reef full of incredible beauty and sea-life.

Before you knew it, night was falling, and your tails were growing stiffer. "Aww, looks like the fun's almost over." Nina said, before you all started to head back.

You reach the shoreline where you first met the mermaids in time for your tails to split off and re-form into legs.

Kelly let out a heavy yawn, and everyone joined in. "Ooh, sorry, I'm just so tired."

"I think that goes for all of us." Nina added.

"Yes, it has been a long night... and day." Lorelei agreed. "Why don't the two of you get some rest and meet us back here at sundown tomorrow. Then we can give you another mermaid day."

"We'd love that." You and Corey say together. Waving goodbye, you and Corey head back home.

As you were taking off your clothes, Corey walked into your room. "You were serious about that, weren't you; what you whispered to me in the cavern?"

"Dead serious." You said with a nod.

"So, this is it then...


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