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Chronivac Version 4.0

The end of mouse Nathan

added by Raven Cross 6 years ago O

The mouse found the trap with the peanut butter on it & stepped on the trap to eat it. If Nathan had been human he would of known better to get near the trap but as a mouse he didn't. The mouse began to eat when suddenly the trap went off. The metal bar snapped over the mouse's mid-section nearly cutting him in half. Nathan would of screamed in horrible pain if he could of. Soon he lost all feeling below his waist because the trap had broken his spine. Nathan laid there in the worst pain of his life as his family celebrated Christmas upstairs. The mouse laid there all night & the next day Nathan's mom came downstairs to check the trap & found the dead mouse. Pleased she dumped the trap in the trash never knowing the dead mouse was Nathan. As for the Chronivac Nathan's profile disappeared from it. A sad end for a kid who just wanted to have some fun as a mouse. The sad end of Nathan.


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