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The Madame Illusia

Now eye see you, now eye don't

added by sneme 6 years ago A BM O

"Oh, exciting! Venus fly trap eyelids!" Madame Illusia exclaimed.

Tyler moaned, angry that he didn't land on the Original Body panel. He didn't have much time to moan however, as his next change was just starting up. Because of his new eyes, he could see directly up and down - and noticed a shadow growing over both his fields of vision, and his directly down view blocked by a growing, green membrane. The pair of growths continued to extend for about half a minute, slowly. After their initial growth finished, they thickened slightly and gained a deep pink hue on the inside.

The next part of the change began, Tyler noticed, as he saw a number of spines grow out of his new growths. He also noticed the shine of a thousand sensitive hairs throughout his new sight corridor, and felt the final touches finish on his new eyelids.

"At least I can blink again," Tyler thought, but he soon realized he could not close them on his own. Instead, Madame held a mirror up to one of his eyes.

"Don't your new eyelids look stunning!" she happily taunted. Tyler looked on in horror, his eyes now framed by a giant Venus fly trap head! Before he could even take this in, Madame flicked a dead fly into the inside of his eyelid. It slammed shut! Tyler couldn't open it at all, his vision completely blocked on his left half. She then whipped around and repeated it with his right eyelid.

The crowd went wild while the now momentarily blind Tyler stumbled around. He felt tears well up uncontrollably from his many eyes, a mixture of Venus fly trap digestive juices and tears causing a searing, yet somewhat pleasurable feeling as he digested the fly and reabsorbed its nutrients via his tear ducts.

Eventually, his eyes pried open, and he could see again. He wanted to yell at Madame for blinding him, but he felt compelled to do that after he got his body back. Tyler trotted over to the wheel, feeling his new eyelids flutter slightly, and gave it a hard spin.


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