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Back the same day

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Derrick made his way to the main Spa building, grinning in amazement at the minotaurs, the satyrs, the centaurs, and especially the many oddly dressed and incredibly clean guests. As he stood off to the side, a small electric tram pulled up to drop off a group of tourists. Derrick saw a man and woman and a girl heading for the main desk, and then nearly fell over. it was his parents and sister! They did not look any different from how they had remembered him!

He started for them, and they turned to stare when they saw him approach. There was no recognition at all - of course! He was a totally different person, a filthy peasant farmer from the distant past, wearing what they would see as rags. He stopped and pretended to be looking around. The receptionist said "Ah, your room is ready now. I believe your son wandered off to explore. I will give him your suite location when he comes back." As his family gathered their things, the girl at the desk gave him an obvious wink.

A satyr tugged at his shirt. "Come on. We need to get you cleaned up. And you have to make some decisions." Surprised, Derrick followed the goat-man to Hebe's chamber within the Spa. She smiled when she saw him. "Ah! You are quite the young man I expected. How did you like growing up again?"

"You know who I am?" Derrick was stunned. "But I'm so different!"

"You are a tall, strong, well-hung Scottish redhead. Just what you said you wanted to be just five minutes ago! Before I sent you back as a five year-old." Hebe looked him over. "A bit homely, but quite impressive. Do you wish to keep this, or go back to your old self? Or try something else?"


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