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Holy Retribution!

added by RiversEnd 5 years ago O

After being the beast, Sara lost consciousness near a dumpster. When she woke up she was in a bed in a small room. She slowly sat up in the bed to a run down room with an arch like window, she was wearing a long dress with small flower designs and an off-white shirt buttoned up all the way. Her long black hair was combed and neatly tied in a loose ponytail. She stepped onto the stone and dirt floor, she had no shoes on, then a woman in her late 30s walked in wearing a nun's getup. The woman spoke,''oh, gracias a Dios que estás bien. Cuando te encontré pensé lo peor, ¿cómo te sientes?''
Sara couldn't uderstand what she was saying,'' Wha... I don't know what you're saying?'' The woman spoke,'Hmm, tal vez el padre Héctor te vea de nuevo. Podría ayudarte a recordar algo.'' She led Sara out the door and as they walked into another run down room. A middle aged man in a priest outfit speaks,''Así que ... esta es la vagabunda que la hermana Ángela nos trajo, quiero decir que su corazón está en el lugar correcto, pero no podemos tomar cada alma perdida que viene a través de aquí. No tenemos el dinero para mantener este lugar.'' The man waked up to Sara and examines her head and Sara backs away. ''no te preocupes, no te haré daño.'' says the priest. Sara, still not knowing what he just said, decides that she should just go with it. After seeing no damage, he says,''ella se ve bien ella puede irse ahora.'' The nun nods and ushers her out the door. Sara stood in the front of large wooden doors, as she looks up she sees a worn down church. She feels bad for them as they helped her when no one else would, she had to, but how...


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