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Halted

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“Yes!” You thought as you galloped for the exit. One worker tried to stop you, but he thought better of it and dived to the side. You looked round and saw the female officer riding the grey mare close behind. “You could do it. You were almost there!”

You were a few meters from the exit when you heard an ear-splitting shriek that brought you to a standstill. “HALT!” the female attendant yelled in a supernatural voice. You tried to keep going but the unbearable noise seemed to override all of your senses at once. You collapsed to the floor as your bones felt like jelly, sending Mark crashing to the ground. Your body was completely numb, your vision had gone black and the woman’s voice still resonated deafeningly in your ears.

The horrific feelings seemed to continue for hours as you completely lost track of time and eventually passed out.

When your senses finally returned you found yourself back in the barn. In front of you was Mark. His face had indeed been coated with your juices as you had feared earlier, but you also saw blood dripping down his face, suggesting he took a nasty fall. Next-door you saw Sophie the thief-turned mare, who clearly hadn’t gotten far either. Accompanying her, of course, was officer Georgina whose face was also covered in dirt and dried up horse juice. Both officers had also been stripped of their uniforms, which added to your alarm.

As your hopes dwindled away, the female attendant proceeded to add insult to injury. “I did warn you not to try anything and to be good girls. But of course I had anticipated that you might not want to stay here forever. Guys that become mares are always less obedient, but you two are something else. Therefore, I have cast a further spell on you two, which makes you more obedient.”

You felt more doomed than ever as the weight of her words sunk in.

“Now neigh if you agree to behave.” You and Sophie both neighed in unison.

“Good. Now get to work!” she ordered as she slapped you on the arse. Reluctantly you walked towards Mark.


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