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Hair, Nose, and Skin

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The most striking change was his hair, which had gone from medium brown to a brilliant copper red. Only slightly less dramatic was his pale, freckled skin. It took a moment to notice that his nose was now somewhat pug-like and upturned. The faun grinned at him. "So, you like being changed?"

Derrick turned his head side to side to look at himself. "This is so weird! I mean, I know it's me, but you just did a few things and nobody would ever recognize me!" Then he grinned. "I could walk right up to my parents and they'd probably think I was a stranger."

"Oh, I could make sure of that." The faun waggled his eyebrows. "Want me to keep going?"

Derrick felt his face, noticing for the first time that his hands were also pale and freckled. Having never seen magic before, this was fascinating to him. "Um, you can change me back, right?"

"Oh, sure. Whatever you want. But I bet you won't want to give up everything." The faun looked around to make sure no one else was listening, and then leaned close to whisper "How'd you like to be hung like a horse, and be strong as one, to?"

"That would be awesome!" Derrick imagined himself as a copper-haired bodybuilder with a straining athletic supporter. "Go for it!"

The faun hopped up on the bar with a sudden jump, allowing Derrick to see for the first time that the goat-man wasn't wearing anything. For his size, he was remarkably endowed - probably all goat. It should not have surprised him, seeing as many of the other staff and even some of the guests were naked. Grinning, the faun reached up and took Derrick's head I his hands and said "Close your eyes, young mortal. When you open then again, you will have everything I promised."

Derrick did as instructed, then gasped as what felt like a powerful electric shock rippled through his body. He staggered back and then collapsed on the floor as his body pulled and twisted, senses confused and mind reeling. He couldn't think, he couldn't move, he... and then it was over just as suddenly. He lay panting on the floor as the powerful sensations faded, and he heard the faun say "Well, what do you think?"

Still feeling a little confused and disoriented, Derrick opened his eyes and discovered that the faun had indeed kept his word - Derrick had been transformed into...


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