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The Vials

Saint John?

added by Lordbaron 5 years ago A BM

John soon came back and sat down across from Mary placing the food between them. John had prepared them some sandwiches and the two ate talking occasionally about hobbies and movies. Mary tried not to stare as John sipped his drink, getting more excited with each swallow.
John let out a small belch from the soda,"whoops, pardon me".
John got up to get another soda when he clutched his stomach.
"Woah, something must not be agreeing with me", exclaimed John.
Mary's could hardly contain her excitement as she saw his hair slowly grow, shifting from black to a golden blond. "maybe you should lie down for a bit", suggested Mary.
"Maybe you're righ-aaaggghh!", yelled John as he doubled over in pain, "What is happening to meeeee"
Mary saw two bulges pushing against John's shirt trying to get free from his back.

The bulges were growing with each attempt to escape from their confines, meanwhile John was on his hands and knees sobbing from the pain. "Oh god, please make it stop," yelled John as a tear rolled down his face.

Just then, a loud ripping sound was heard as the wings finally got free, tearing his shirt apart in the process.

Slowly the wings unfurled and grew to a 20ft wingspan, nearly touching both walls in the room. John slowly stood up a look of shock mixed with wonder as he adjusted to the new weight on his back. His tattered shirt falling off exposing the other changes the vial had done to him, giving him the musculature of an ancient greek statue with chiseled abs and pecs, that made Mary's eyes linger on him as she wondered what the rest looked like.

"How could this happen", John asked looking over his new limbs.
"You like them?", inquired Mary.
"This is too much right now ", John sighed sitting down.
"I'm sorry it hurt so much. If I'd known I would have done it another way," stated Mary feeling guilty for causing him pain in the first place.
"Wait, what!? You did this? How? W-why? Start talking, FAST," John's anger began to rise at this deception.
"John, calm down, ok? It's me, Mary. Just give me time to explain it all then you can make a decision. Please."
"This had better be good," John stated angrily as he brushed his new blond hair from his eyes in annoyance.

Mary explained everything from her discovering the vial, to the initial experiment, to how they had arrived at the current moment. When she finished speaking John.......


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