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Chronivac Version 4.0

Tiny prison

added 18 years ago A

"I'll teach this rat a lesson", Jeff's girlfriend thought and configured the device to turn its target into a normal white rat. She then hit Enter, and could immediately see her victim starting to cringe. Fine white hair sprouted all over the girl's skin, her face swelling into a huge buck-toothed muzzle with whiskers and a flat nose. She tried to say something, but couldn't due to the size of her front teeth. Eyes turned a fiery red and her ears rounded out to the top of her head, staring at pawlike hands and feet through these new eyes. She had to turn her hands around multiple times to believe the huge black claws she saw on her fingertips, and used these same hands to run a hand across her growing pink tail that slinked out of her back like an attacking snake. The transformation finished when she stopped shrinking at about one foot in size, sitting on her four paws with her head craned up towards Jeff's girlfriend who then picked her up and watched the new rat as she held her in her hands. "Sorry hon, but I'm not letting you get away with theft that easily, and you know what we do with thieves...", she said as she walked over to an old rodent cage, "...we put them in prison." She then dropped the rat in and closed the lid, the rat frantically climbing across the grates looking for an exit. "Look, Jeff", she said with a smile, "we're gonna be having a guest for a while. And once she calms down, we might even let her out of her cage for a while..." She stuck a finger through the grates and the rat lunged for it, trying to nibble at it. "...which won't be for a while it seems." The rat screeched in her direction, and turned to other business.


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