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Old woman no longer

added 3 years ago AR

Laura decides the only way to try and prevent a mess was to come clean, "This is going to sound crazy but there are magic dice in there that make people younger when they're rolled."

"Oh I get it. It's one of those prank toys. There's a little speaker in here."

Hannah pulls the hair ties off the box and opens it. She pulls out the dice.

"Oh these are pretty. So if I roll them will another message play?"

Before Laura could try to stop her, Hannah rolls the dice.

"Eighty years you have walked this Earth. Now this number is but seventy two. Each roll of the dice returns more of what you have lost."

Laura watches fascinated by seeing the effects on someone else. Definitely not extreme as Laura's later changes had been, the old woman's hair grows fuller, her wrinkles fade, and her posture straightens. Hannah looks herself over her face wide with shock.

"You were telling the truth! Wait does that mean you aren't really that age?"

Laura sighed and said, "Yes, I'm really 43. I've been trying to get the dice back to where they came from so I can get back to normal."

"Wow they can do that much? I couldn't tell at all you weren't a real little girl!"

Laura blushed at the statement and opens for mouth to reply. She doesn't have a chance to before Hannah picks up and rolls the dice several more times. The spirit's voice overlaps announcing each roll preventing Laura from hearing the numbers. She is blinded by the light from all the orbs appearing at once. When it subsides the old woman is long gone replaced by a woman in her mid, or maybe even early, thirties.


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