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Annetta is saved

added by chikapow 3 years ago A BM

It happened as quick as the lighting in the sky . A thunder clap . A scream . A fall. Annetta was plummeting helpless down the cliff`s side. Stella panicked as she disappeared in the foam on the crest of the waves . Gabriella and Stella knew at that very instant what they had to do. They had to save her friend.

When Annetta hit the water , she became a part of another world. She swallowed sea water in attempts to extract air from the water , but the salt gagged her and made her sick to her stomach. Her longs burned for air as the salty water blinded her eyes .

With her stinging eyes , She peered around . But She could not see anything for the storm clouds had darkened the sea . She closed her eyes fearing the worst . But something that She couldn`t describe , something powerful , over took her . She felt warmth in her hooves and face , the feeling spread through her entire body . Annetta didn`t feel ,through , the urge to breathe . It wasn`t that She could gulp down air in the water, but She felt as though her lungs where full and content . She heard the twinkling of soft , angelic chimes. Annetta also felt as though someone was elongating her hooves and spread them apart in separate pieces. But that didn`t not pain her, in fact she felt an She felt more of a tickling sensation then anything.

When the feeling left her, her chest felt as through all oxygen had been squeezed out . The darkness of the sea blacked and Annetta could no longer see the fish swimming around her. She was going to drown , going to die . She almost let the effort to try to float to the surface go away and let her body sink to the fathoms below . That would be the case , if someone hadn`t grabbed she and brought her to the sought after surface. Annetta took a deep breath , looking at her savoir as she gasped for air .Her salty eyes made it nearly impossible to see and everything was blurry , but she could clearly tell the person who had saved her was a human teenager . But the world faded in nothing but dark ebony and she passed out from lack of oxygen.

When Annetta awoke, the sun was setting it`s glorious rays on the swishing and calm sea . The morning breeze smelled of fresh rain and the gentle hint of salt. Annetta 's legs felt the calming and refreshing sense of the waves lapping over them. She sighed a sigh of content and peace.

She then saw before her 2 naked women of different ages in front of her. The oldest looking in her thirties and had messy and uncombed brown hair. The other looking might of been 24 or 25 one had gingery hair that fell into her staggering deep brown eyes, freckles strayed over her cheeks.

"She`s alright ; she waking up," the red head said, smiling slightly , showing off her overbite.

"When we got to shore, you weren't responding ... and we thought ...the worst." The oldest one said.

Annetta then shifted her glance from the girls to her body. Looking back at her where two white human legs. She lifted her arms and flexed her hands, squealing in delight even though she didn't have clothes on.She was a human being again.

"I didn’t believe ..." She said and gasped , covering her mouth with her hands ."I didn’t believe that I could speak again! I don’t think that my wish... could come true ! How did ...?"

The red head smiled and said "We saved you. We risked our own lives to help a friend. When we jumped in the water all the donkey parts washed away."

Annetta jumped up in excitement , wobbling to get to her feet. It was strange to stand on two legs again and not as a donkey that only did it for a trick to amuse people.

When Annetta looked in the cool calm water she saw not a donkey , but a blond human girl. It was her original nicely shaped face, with her blue eyes and freckles. Her heart leaped with joy.

"Wow, "She breathed almost speechless . "This is incredible ... wow... I can`t believe it ..."

After a few minutes more of looking in her reflection and stuttering in amazement, she said "Forgive me , but now I have to learn who you are ..."She pointed to the red head . "I`m Stella" She said smiling. Gabriella introduced herself as human. Annetta was pleased to see what her friends truly looked like.


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