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Allison's New Older Siblings

added 5 years ago AP BM

Allison replaced the word "oldest" with "youngest". It's not like this thing worked anyway. Besides, even assuming it did, she would be the same, but free from the responsibilities of the oldest child. She hit Enter.

Just then, she remembered that both Lucas, her 10-year-old brother, and Brie, her 7-year-old sister, had had a friend over that day. She walked towards Brie's room, where the door was cracked open. Allison and Brie didn't really get along; Brie was very girly whereas Allison, though not a tomboy, just didn't care so much about being super feminine. But Allison was astonished to catch a glimpse inside of the room and see what she saw.

Instead of 7-year-old Brie and her friend Ella playing with Barbies, she saw two girls who looked slightly older than her. The blond girl (who had to be Brie!) wore denim short shorts and a tight blue T-shirt that gave quite a view of her DD-cup breasts, while the dark-haired girl (Ella) was more subtle in khaki shorts and a regular red T-shirt.

Brie was saying, "I don't get why you like that geek Aaron, Ella. He's just so...meh. Boring. What do you like about him?"

Allison bristled. She had babysat little Aaron before and thought he was a sweet little boy. Her sister really was a shallow jerk.

"Now Phillip, on the other hand," Brie continued. Allison snorted. Phillip was nice enough, but he couldn't be that smart if he got hooked up with Brie. Which was evidently the case. He had been chubby when younger but it seemed that Brie had noticed when he slimmed down and muscled up and it wasn't long before...Allison gagged at the thought.

She moved on to Lucas' room. Lucas was an athletic young boy who was an expert at getting on her nerves. She peeked inside and saw two guys who looked like high school seniors. They were playing video games, a race game to be exact. When it ended, one stood up and stretched.

Allison realized it was Lucas. He was very good-looking, with tight and defined muscles bulging out all over his body. He wore a tight muscle shirt that emphasized his sizable chest. The other boy, his friend Evan, was similar, but leaner and blond to Lucas' black hair. Evan made Allison catch her breath. He'd been her brother's annoying accomplice before, but now, he was a hunk significantly older than her. Out of her league.

Allison retreated to her room, amazed by the changes wrought by one word. She wondered what to do next.


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