You are not logged in. Log in
 

Search

in The Magic Shop by anyone tagged as none

The Magic Shop

Improving the mall

added by tily9 3 years ago O

Suddenly, Jason paused and reconsidered. Why not change the mall after all? The place had been suffering a slow decline for a number of years, and many of the higher quality stores had left to be replaced by more lower budget businesses. Still, the mall had held on to a few nice things, a decent jewelry shop in the eastern wing, a tiny store near the entrance that specialized in grand pianos, and now, this fancy shoe store.

Oh, and the theater, of course. That business in particular had kept this mall bustling even in the lean seasons. Speaking of which, Will’s movie would probably be letting out soon. After that, the two of them would meet up again, and Jason could tell his friend about this awesome new app!

Then again, maybe not. Keeping this secret to himself could also be fun. Well, whatever he decided, he would cross that bridge when he came to it. For now, the mall.

Pointing his phone towards the high ceiling at the mall’s center, Jason generated another sentence.

“This mall caters to many customers from the surrounding community.”


Hm, this certainly had some possibilities. What should he change?


Title suggestions for new chapters. Please feel free to use them or create your own below.

Write a new chapter

List of options your readers will have:

    Tags:
    You need to select at least one TF type
    Tags must apply to the content in the current chapter only.
    Do not add tags for potential future chapters.
    Read this before posting
    Any of the following is not permitted:
    • comments (please use the Note option instead)
    • image links
    • short chapters
    • fan fiction (content based off a copyrighted work)
    All chapters not following these rules are subject to deletion at any time and those who abuse will be banned.


    Optional