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One of the other patients

added by unit5421 4 years ago A BM

After Hana had left the waiting room and the two former friends turned wifes had already been changed so much Amber decided that it was time to change someone else. At the end of the waiting room sad an older woman who did not look all too happy with her current lot in life. At least I can make her happy Amber thought to herself and she opened the first sentence on the app. It read:
"This recently divorced woman is lamenting about the events leading to her husband leaving her."

Not much Amber could do with that but she decided to make a small change for her own fun before opening another sentence. After some fiddling, the sentence read: "This recently divorced woman is happy about the events leading to her husband leaving her."

It was a small change and Amber did not exactly know what she had done but the effect of the change was clear for all to see as the women looked a great deal more optimistic. Amber was far from done with her new test subject and opened a new sentence that reads:
"Caroline is looking with interest to the two other patients in the waiting room"

So she is named Caroline Amber thought to herself. Time to get this show on the road:
"Caroline is looking with excitement to the two other patients in the waiting room"

And like that there was a light in Caroline's eyes and she pulled on her shirt as she was looking over the two taurs in the room. Amber knew what she was feeling and opened the app again seeing how far she could take this.
"Carolines is pulling on her shirt from the excitement she gets by looking over to two taurs in the room"

Time to see what happens if I added something less specific Amber thought. Another quick change and it read:
"Carolines is pulling on her tail from the excitement she gets by looking over to two taurs in the room"

Looking up something had clearly changed. Since Amber had not said what kind of tail Caroline was pulling the app had gifted Caroline with a lizard looking tail with human skin instead of scales. Caroling was holding the tip and seemed to be pulling it slightly up and down.

Shoul I make more changes to the people in the waiting room or find some new subjects Amber thought to herself?


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