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Not what he expected

added by Sarahmermaid 2 years ago A

John is usually a gentleman and would steer away from a bathroom or somewhere occupied by a woman, however, her painful cries were not something he could ignore. "Erin what's wrong? I'm coming in" He tried the door handle but he was turning both ways, having trouble opening it.

John can hear Erin breathing heavily. Either she is in a rush to cover herself or she is in serious trouble. Then Erin cries "Oh..." before she is drowned out by rushing water. At this point, John had enough and tried the handle again before realising his mistake. He turned the door handle to the right with more force and this caused the door to open. He was finally inside. Inside a flooded room.

The water stopped running and heels clopped across the floor "I'm ready..." Erin called out hesitantly.

The so-called 'gentleman' peered around the door and immediately found his date for the evening, wet, blushing and standing in the middle of the bathroom floor. She was dressed for the occasion with a gorgeous red dress and black high heels but other than that, she was not how he expected her to look. He had to get right inside since he couldn't believe his eyes. "Is everything ok?" She asked with a nervous tone.
John expected a regular girl matching his friends description, or even better, and she had a beautiful face. But Erin seemed to be... not so normal. For starters, the majority of her body exposed to him was covered in these strange shiny bumps. "Don't ask..." He thought to himself. "Are you alright? " He asked instead.

Erin nodded. "Yeah, I'm sorry for that. I think I was just...just..." Erin was cut short and she began to wheeze. "...nervous" cough. Suddenly, the bumps on her body lost their shine and flared up like large goosebumps. John watched in horror as Erin scratched her body, digging her nails in. "Change of plan...let's go...movies right?" *The coughing intensified and scales fell off her body like flakes.

"I'll call a doctor, you appear to be sick or something"

"John please it's..." Just when Erin thought she was at her worst. Another painful spasm erupted through her body. She screamed causing John to cover his ears but he continued to watch his date as she was in a lot of pain. He tried to get closer but once her heels burst, and giant fins unraveled from in front of her, they both panicked. They looked at each other for a moment in fear before Erin started to wobble.
"Woah...wo-WOAH!" Erin struggled to stand with all her might and her fins flopped in all directions but it seemed she could no longer stand on the thin fins. She fell on her front with a loud, wet thud. Erin's torso started to swell and green bumps multiplied, covering her entire skin, leaving just her beautiful face. "What...what's happening to you?" He asked, wondering if he should stay or simply leave the scene.


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