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Magic Pony: The Pilot

As soon as Julie hits play on the VCR, the screen lit up brighter than the sun.

“Uuuuh, is it supposed to do that?” Sabrina asked.

Suddenly a vortex emerged from the TV screen sucking everyone in. You arrive just in time to see your sister get sucked in.

“Big brother!” She cries reaching out.

Without even thinking you drop the cake and grab onto her hand, pulling with all your might, only to be sucked into the TV with the other kids as the portal closes behind you all.

The six of you fall through a spinning tunnel of color and light, feeling your bodies stretch and warp to cartoony proportions. You keep falling and falling for what felt like minutes till suddenly you hit the ground.

~~~

When you finally regain consciousness you realize a few things:

1.you’re no longer in your house, now your in a bright colored grassy field surrounded by purple and dark blue trees.

2. Every one around you was now a cartoony pony.

3. They were panicking like crazy.

The five ponies ran around screaming, checking their faces with their hooves, trying and failing to walk, or giggling uncontrollably. However eventually (and by that I mean after 5 whole minutes of panicking) they seamed to calm down and you were able to deduce pretty quickly that these ponies were in fact Julie’s friends.

Sabrina was now Strawberry Delicious.
Miki had become Thunder-Flash.
Andre was Aqua- Heart.
Trixie had turned into Flame- Burst.
And lastly Jane was none other than Princess Sunshine herself.

That just left two questions. (Well ok their were probably 30 pressing questions at the moment, but these next two were still pretty important.)


Who had you and your sister become?


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