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A Weekend at the Vick's Mansion.

added by Mxsez 18 years ago O

"Life was too perfect for Jon Vicks. He had everything. The most expensive car in town, All the girls, All the looks, and all the money he could every dream of. But all good things must come to an end one day." A young boy says standing next to the Vick's mansion gate,
"Jon's friend Tommy, came over one day and told him that he had been seeing his girl. Jon was heartbroken. An hour later his parents were killed in a mysterious car crash. Jon wasn't the heir to his parents money and so he was left with the house. Jon went mad and locked himself in his house. No one came, No one left. For three years he worked on evil experiments... And then the people of the surrounding town started disappearing and the police investigated having Jon Vick's their main suspect. They raided the house and it looked as if nobody had lived there since the day of the crash." He makes a weird face as he swallows a fly and then continues,
"When the went into Jon's bedroom, Written in blood on the wall was, 'You shall pay'"
"Did they ever find Jon's body?" A young boy named Max asked.
"No" said the teen named Mark.
Mark's girlfriend, Sue, stared at the mansion. A twenty-one year old, clings to her boyfriend named Tom.
"The bet we lost said we had to stay here for one weekend." Tom says.
Mark sighs, "I shouldn't have done the backflip. I wouldn't have messed up."
Max climbs through the bars.
"Get out of there Max" Mark says.
"But i wanna play with you guys big brother." Max replies.
"Tom, I will keep you company." Tom's Girl, Sam, says with hesitation.
Mark stares at the mansion. "Lets go."
They all climb over the gate and into the yard. As they cross the yard, Max opens the door since he had the head start. He disappears into the house and then comes running out. "Mark, theres a message in red paint for you." he says.
Marks and the others run into the house and they all gasp as they see written on the wall is 'Have a nice stay, Mark'.
As they look around they notice Max is missing. "MAX!" Mark yells but there is no answer.
"ugh... Guess i have to look for him." He says.


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