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Every One Into The Pool

added by K 2 years ago O

It took awhile for Sean to convince Susan that he was really her brother and the medallion had changed him into this form.

Susan looked over the clothing and said "It looks like you touched a shirt that used to belong to Tina, you look about 18 now that's 3 years younger that the real Tina."

Sean looked at Susan "I already figured that much out so tell me something I don't know."

"Well your lucky the real Tina is away at collage so you wont be bumping into her."

Susan was about to continue when the door bell rang "Pick up these cloths and I will see who it is" as she got up and went to the door.

At the door Susan met her girl friends Amber and Helen who both grabbed her as they said "We know all about your plains being messed up so we came over to cheer you up and take you to Ann's pool party."

Susan looked back into the living room to see that Sean had all the cloths back into the bag "I would love to come but I have a friend over."

The two girls looked past Susan to see Sean "well she can come too, by the way you look familiar do we know you."

Susan said "No you don't know her, this is Mary."

Sean just stood there looking at the 3 girls not knowing what to do.

Susan then stepped forward "Give me a sec well I talk to Mary" as she grabbed Sean's arm and led her into the other room.

While the two were in the other room Amber turned to Helen "did you see what she was wearing, I mean she looks like she could pop out of that top any sec." the two girls laughed.

In the other room Susan said "Listen the girls want us to go to a pool party and I think we will."

Sean said "NO way am I leaving the house like this."

Susan said "OH yes you are the girls want both of us to go and we are or do you want me to tell mum and dad what I caught you doing in your room."

Sean said "PLEASE NO, DON'T MAKE ME GO."

Susan looked at Sean as she dragged her to her room "we are going and that's it MARY."

Susan yelled to the other two "we will be right with you, just going to put our bikinis on now."

Susan then reached into her draw and throw Sean one of her bikinis.


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