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Chronivac Version 4.0

Chronivac: Do not operate while drunk

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Jeff woke to find that he was now sensitive to light, sound, and movement. Beep Beedle Deedle Deet. Something was making an obnoxious chirping noise... but then it was gone...

Okay, some notification I'll ignore. Jeff rolled back over and covered his face... About to fall asleep, Beep Beedle Deedle Deet sounded again. Irritated he twisted his top half back to the source and realized it must be coming from his computer... the realignment of his insides allowed a sudden belch to escape followed by a fart; the taste of beer mixed with everything else he consumed yesterday mingled in unsavory ways, never before had Jeff been so disgusted by his smell...

Beep Beedle Deedle Deet! The 8 bit sound was sharp to his sensitive ears and grated on him... A minor programming oversight kept the message box refreshing to the front of the program every minute and beeping every refresh as it had been since the transformation was completed...

Jeff slowly put a foot out of bed and moved himself to a sitting position as the world spun violently... Being drunk and hungover was a new sensation for Jeff the 16-year-old and he did not like it. His thoughts hurt, light and sound hurt, he felt sluggish and bloated, everything about this is awful, why did he let his dad do this to him last night?

Jeff knew why, as an almost 50-year-old friend with 90 extra lbs, he could handle alcohol better than Jeff the high school sophomore. "Ughhh-eeerrrrp" Jeff released another beer-flavored belch. Beep Beedle Deedle Deet! Jeff winced.

Jeff didn't quite trust standing yet, so he lowered himself to the floor and crawled the 4 feet to his computer chair. Lifting himself he could finally see what was causing the noise... "Satisfaction Survey! Would you take a moment to rate your first experience with our product?"

"Ugh" Jeff moaned in disgust pressing escape.

"Thank you for agreeing to our survey!" the program replied.

Another moan and sense of desperation to get away from this obligation, (walking away from the PC didn't occur to him) Jeff button mashed and tried all the normal control buttons to get away, spacebar, enter and escape...

Jeff eventually got a popup thanking him which was immediately dismissed and due to his lowered reaction time, he continued hitting buttons as he was returned to the main interface where his and Mike's profiles were up...

Jeff also realized that focusing and reading were not his friends when the world was spinning, and ran to the bathroom barely resisting throwing up...

Since he was there, he decided to take a shower hoping that the smell of beer and bonfire would wash away.

The survey Jeff blasted through asked for ratings on transformations he experienced; if alternate interpretations would have better suited him or the subject, and if the user wanted to re-enable aspects of the transformation or try the alternate options presented.

Any transformation enacted this way will leave Mike unaware and change reality, just like with the original transformation, but will last until the user disables it.


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