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Chronivac Version 4.0

Bryan wants to be a bit younger, Jay also grows younger

added by Kisao 11 months ago AR BM
Author note:
Hello ! It's my first chapter ! So sorry if it's short ! Also sorry if i made mistake in english, it's not my primary language ! If you want add, don't hesitate !

Simon thought for a while, he didn't want to change anything, but the temptation was strong.

but, before Simon can make a decision, Brian then starts talking
"Hey Simon ! Look... I'm too old, Can you make me a bit younger ?"

Simon look at Brian, he was Indeed a bit old, with his hairs who are starting to be gray... So Simon accepted to make Brian younger
"You want to become witch age then ??"

"Let's be... 24 !"

Simon nod and start to write in his computer then
RECOMMENDED CHANGES AVAILABLE. APPLY?

Simon click on accept and the change start then.
INITIALIZING SYSTEM. 2 SUBJECTS TO ALTER. COMMENCING TRANSFORMATION: SUBJECT 1 OF 2 ...

the laser then hits Brian, who then begins to look younger... his hair becomes completely brown again, his hair then also comes back a little bit and his belly also tightens a little. other than that, there haven't been any major changes. Exept he look more tired, even if he was younger

COMMENCING TRANSFORMATION: SUBJECT 2 OF 2
Now, the laser hit Jay, who look at it in horror.
"What ?! Why it change me too ?!"
Jay then start as well to become smaller. At 7, he only become smaller, at 6, he talked again
"No...i become younger it'z Bad..."
Jay had now a lisp and his two front teeth was missing. But he continue to regress, his two front teeth appair back, but as baby teeth, a lot of other teeth do the same...
At 3, he was cute. He have freckles, but also a lot of baby fat.
"No no no !"
He Say as he continue to become younger
Then he hit 2, he fall on his butt since he have less dexterity, and he start to cry, a lot of teeth have go back into his mouth

"Nu... Zinze Bwian iz youngew...i am youngew too..."
Then, his toddler mind start to appair and he start to cry

Simon who was looking at all that was surprised and was wondering what he have to do.


What do you do now?


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