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Surprise Dan Within His Own Egg

added by Elflover 9 months ago O Mythological Magic

Kat stared at the egg for a long, long time. Her brother was finally getting his comeuppance. At last. After years of thinking himself the eighth wonder of the world, of lying and cheating through his problems and out of his misdeeds and denigrating anyone he thought was beneath him, which meant about 99.99% of people on the planet, he was finally in a position to be punished. He was convinced to be smart while he worked only the minimum of minimum because he was simply lazy and had no interest for anything, let alone passion. He used his good looks to glide through life and gather up advantages he didn't deserve. Kat could not count all the times Dan had blamed her successfully for the awful things he did and she had gotten scolded and grounded instead of him. Stealing, cheating and lying were a staple of this guy and even though Kat had warned his girlfriends that he was a jerk, those poor girls still got swindled anyway. Each new girl was flattered to attract the interest of someone like Dan, so handsome and mature, before she understood his real nature. The truth was that Dan's smoking, wether cigarettes or weed, and drinking, as well as popularity, notably with girls, was simply pseudo-mature behavior that just stopped working past high school or at best the first years of college. But now, Kat was in charge and she was not going to stop herself from having fun and getting payback for all the years of abuse.
The question was: what to do now? The possibilities were endless and many very tempting indeed. It all required a long-thought reflexion. The first easy choice for Kat was that she would send Dan to one of the fantasy realms she had read about in her books of magic. Realms where creatures considered fantastic or mythological lived and roamed free like vampires, dragons, nymphs or mermaids. But what should she make Dan into? Into what sort of new family should she let the magic get her stupid brother to? And more importantly, in what shape. Should she change his gender? Transform him into something else, yes, of course, but what? And should she alter his mind as well. Making him into a hot air-headed girl sounded good, so he could see how it felt to be hit on by men even when one did not like it. And with a part of his personality screaming from the inside of his brain as he was ruled by raging new desires. Or should she give him homosexual tendencies? Should she make him live without any sort of good looks? Should Kat even regress him? He could simply be left to roam a new world, a very strange one, in a new body. Should he forget all about his previous life, and be ruled by new instincts and tastes as Kat knew that he'd be appalled at his new state if only he could realize it? So many choices... Decisions, decisions... And then Kat settled on an appropriate fate for her pseudo-mature brother.


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