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It's all over

added by 15832 17 years ago A

You get to your new hooves and run away from the crowd toward the water. Another boy sees you and follows you. “Wait,” the voice calls, sounding a little odd. You turn and get a look at the boy following you. It’s not a boy at all, it’s a girl. “Please, I don’t belong here, I’m not a boy.” A tail waves feverishly behind her as you gesture for her to follow you.

You reach the waters edge, the mainland visible. You run with your hooves in the sand and here a scream. The girl has fallen into the sand with her hands on her stomach. Suddenly, you feel it too. You yelp as you fall to the soft sand.

“Uhhh aggg rr.. uh aw AW HEE HAW HEE HAW,” the girl brays her teeth growing large and then her face stretching to compensate. Your insides feel like their being crushed, and then a bit of relief comes as your shirt tears off your body. You look at the brown fur covering you as your hands start to tremble.

The girl continues to bray, her clothes ripping and her feet curling into hooves. “Noooooo,” you groan as your hands curl into fists and become stiff and dark. You drag your new hooves in the sand trying to crawl away. “hu hu ha HAW HEE HAW HEE,” you bray trying to fight it, but it won’t stop. The girl’s body swells as her hands form hooves and her mind disappears.

You bray, your face aching as it stretches. Your body grows larger and you start to feel weak. You try to move toward the water, but your mind starts to wander, wander toward the female donkey now standing on the beach.

With a few more grunts and brays, you drift away. Your mind gone. All that’s left is the tatters of clothes you shed, the humanity you abandoned to make an ass out of yourself.


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