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a promise kept

added 16 years ago A BM TG

After that, shooting continued for another hour in much the same fashion. Susan and Kat pulled Danielle out of the pool and asked her to recline on the conjured sand. Danielle hesitated, not feeling at all comfortable in such feminine poses. Then Kat threatened and she relented. They even got her to do some topless shots, carefully arranged from behind ("I don't want an R rating," as Susan put it).

Danielle couldn't help but notice she was getting most of the attention, as Rachel was thrilled to keep swimming in the pool, occasionally popping up to the side to watch. Susan kept complimenting Danielle's sexy looks and stunning fins, much to Danielle's annoyance.

"I think that's the last one!" Susan finally said. With one arm covering her breasts Danielle quickly grabbed a towel and wrapped it around her, still uncomfortable to be showing them off.

"Well, Kat?" she asked.

"What was that?" Kat asked with mock innocence.

"You said you'd change me back!"

"Oh right, of course. Well, I'm not sure about your performance... but Susan seems happy enough. A deal's a deal." She gestured, and Danielle felt her fins splitting, a feeling that spread up her tail as they became legs. At the same time, he felt his chest rearranging, mass disappearing from the front and going into wider shoulders and more muscle. He looked down and was forced to admit Kat had kept her promise to give him a little more muscle. It was nothing dramatic, but he looked like he'd been using weights religiously for a few months.

Quickly, he shifted the towel down a bit, as he knew he wasn't wearing any clothes now. Then he stood up for the first time in hours and took a few steps around, relieved to have legs again.

Rachel, still with a tail, had been watching all this from the pool. "Hey Dan!" she called. "You did great!" Then she blew him a kiss.


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