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A thief enters the store

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Aden was browsing the shelves when he heard a bell ring. He peeked through a shelf to see a man with a gun and his face covered.

"Gee wonder what he wants?" Aden said, already knowing the answer.

Aden saw the thief was aiming right at Mr Yaun. He had to stop him from shooting... that would be a cruel fate for the old man... AND his friend.

Mr Yaun saw from the corner of his eye, but did not know what to do. He thought he was just going to get robbed. But the glint in the thief's eye said someone was going to die this afternoon. But what Mr Yaun saw that the thief didn't, was Aden coming from the side, tackling the thief.

"UGGG!!!" The thief cried as he began firing wildly, which the bullets only hit the ceiling.

Aden simply snatched the gun out of the scrawny man's hand and gave him a swift punch to the face. Which knocked the thief out---quickly.

"That was unexpected." Mr. Yaun said, taking out a vile and handing it to Aden. "Hm, you should be rewarded for your bravery. I think you'll like it. As for your friend, he will be back to normal in about fifteen minutes. You can just g-"

Mr Yaun was quickly cut off by Aden. "No, I stay till he is better."


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