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David runs toward the corral filled with girls. He looks over his shoulder and sees a group of guards heading toward him. One of the other corrals he passes is filled with donkeys and David stops. He lifts up a latch and swings the gate open. The donkeys start to flood out of the corral into the warehouse. The guards in pursuit are blocked off but they start to make their way around the herd.

David reaches the girls’ corral. The girl with the bra looks up as he reaches the door. “Who are you?” David starts looking for a way to open the door, “my name’s David, I’m gonna try and get you out of here.” The girls all scramble to their feet, those who can still walk, and try to help David with the door. “How do you open it,” David asks checking around. “I think there’s a lever, just over th-“ The girl reaches her arm out to point but her fingers start to turn dark and ball into a fist. She screams as her hand forms into a hoof. “Hurry, get us out of here.”

David find a series of levers and just throws them all. Corrals open up, hooks and chains start release, and massive doors start to close at the loading area. The girl’s corral swings open and they flood out. The gather around David, “quick, we have to get to the docks before the door closes.” The group all race toward the closing door.

The steel door is halfway closed as they reach it and get safely to the other side. David looks back at some of the girls who had fallen behind. One of them is the girl with the bra. “Come on, hurry,” David yells. The girls run faster, but the girl in the bra suddenly lets out a groan. She falls to the ground planting her hooves in front of her. She grunts a few times and screams, “help me, I… I… aaagg.. aaaw HEE HAW HEE HAW.” The last thing David sees of her is her face stretching out into a muzzle as the door closes.


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