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Still not good enough

added 15 years ago BM

Jill looked down at herself and surveyed the changes so far. She now had shoulder length copper colored hair, but it was still thin and lifeless. She had a thin waist, but it was still flabby. She had breasts, but they wouldn’t be anything to brag about for years. In short, despite all the stealing she’d done, Jill wasn’t any more desirable than she had been an hour earlier.

“There has to be a way to do it all in one go.” She muttered to herself. “There has to be a better way.” One thing she realised was that a fabulous figure wasn’t much good unless you had a beautiful face to match. She switched the gun over to Facial Features and aimed the plus end at herself. Jill was getting frustrated now and was beyond caring who she stole from or how much they had to give, but was still smart enough to know that stealing facial features from guys wasn’t a great idea. She pointed the gun at the nearest woman and gave it a burst. Her face warmed and tingled as her features shifted around and she let go of the trigger in order to see what had changed. She pulled a compact out of her purse and noticed at once that her nose had changed shape. It was thinner and a bit smaller, with a slight upturn at the end, very cute. Her eyes were also slightly bigger and her eyelashes were longer. Everything was just a little bit prettier. She looked over at the woman she’d fired at, who looked kind of plain, but Jill didn’t know how she’d looked before so it was hard to compare.

She scanned around again and fired at a woman in her 30s. This time Jill watched the other woman’s face as her lips thinned, blemishes started appearing and her eyes lost some of their shine. She let go of the trigger and looked in her mirror again to find that her eyes were now a vibrant green and her lips were fuller and slightly reddish. Loving every minute of this, Jill fired at another three women for about 10 seconds each, not taking much from each one, but it all added up to a face that was very pretty and even borderline beautiful. She decided to save some fun for later and went back to her problem from earlier.

Everything she had taken from other people had worked, but it still hadn’t made her as attractive as she wanted to be. Nothing was quite right. She needed a way to capture the full package of a woman and take it for herself. She looked at the dial on the gun hoping for inspiration, and it hit her. She wanted the full package of a woman…so how about stealing the gender of another female! She nearly laughed out loud. It was worth a try, since there wasn’t really a downside. If she stole the gender of a man she’d become a man, but if she only targeted other girls, the worst that could happen was it would do nothing since she was already a girl.

Ready to try out her idea, Jill needed a test subject. She wandered the mall for a while before she found a suitable person. Hidden in an alcove between two shops, Jill watched the woman in the hair salon across the corridor who had fallen asleep in the drying chair. Switching the gun to gender, she fired at the woman and held the trigger down. At first she just felt warm, but it was all over her body. She looked at her hands and saw them slimming, her fingers tapering and her skinny arms rounding out. Her face was shifting again and then she lost all thought as the intensely pleasurable tingling of her scalp heralded something changing in her hair. She lost herself in the sensation as her locks crept down her shoulder blades becoming thicker, shinier and slightly wavy. All of a sudden though, it stopped. Jill came down off her high and looked over at the woman in the drying chair. Except that she didn’t look like a woman anymore…she looked more like a shop mannequin come to life. Every outward sign that made her a woman was gone. She was hairless, her face was plain and unisex, her legs were short and thin and she had no breasts, hips or butt to speak of. If Jill hadn’t known she was a woman a minute ago, she sure wouldn’t know now.

Jill swore, she couldn’t let anyone find the woman looking the way she did. Not even stopping to check out her own changes, she reversed the gun and watched the woman as she slowly turned back into her old self…almost. Jill kept a little of what she had taken, but left the still sleeping woman easily recognisable as such. Now knowing that she could steal what she thought of as the femininity of other women, Jill returned to her old hunting ground, the food court.


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