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Sad girl in the rain.

added 15 years ago AR

Bobby walked back in the general direction of his house when he passed the park. The
sky was getting dark at this point, and he figured it would rain soon.

Out of the corner of his eye, he saw a figure seated on one of the park swings. It was a
girl, and she looked quite sad.

She had a black dress on, and her hair was done up in a french braid that he thought
looked very cute. Her hair was such a pale blonde color that it looked white in the low
lighting. Part of him wished he could see her eyes, but he didn't feel right getting that
close.

Judging from how her feet dangled off the ground, he guessed her to be much younger
than himself. That's when he felt the ring on his finger tingle.

"I know, I'll make her a little older, I bet she'll be hot." The very thought aroused him. He
shouldn't do this, since "Merlin" (whatever the old man's real name was) said the change
was permanent, but...

He pointed the ring. "Magic ring, do your thing!"

The girl gasped as a blue glow surrounded her....and to Bobby's shock, she began to
shrink!

"What the hell?!" He said it aloud, but the girl was in no position to hear him.

Her dress became first one size too large, then two, then three. She'd been wearing high,
laced up leather boots with thick soles, just like the ones the goth girls at his school wore,
and before his eyes, they began to dangle loosely on her feet as they too shrank in size.

She was getting younger, not older!

He felt a growing stiffness between his legs; this was turning him on even more! Was it
the feeling of power, or something else?

It then occured to him he'd better stop the ring, before there was nothing left of the girl
(although something about her shrinking away to nothing...no!). Putting those thoughts
out of his head, he commanded the ring to stop.

The girl fell out of the swing and lay on the ground as it started to rain.

Bobby ran up to see if she was alright. The girl was unconcious. She was so small and
delicate, and if anything, she'd become even cuter. Whatever age she had been before, she
was definitely under 12 now. But she was so small! He was certain his younger sister
Danielle was taller than this girl, and Dani was only 8!

He'd sure done it this time. Darn that old man! Well he couldn't leave the girl out in the
rain. Gathering her up in his arms (she was so light and warm he felt giddy), he carried
her off.

Her boots slid right off her feet as he lifted her...not that she'd be able to wear them any
longer. Not having any free hands to use, he left them alone, and ran back to the mall.

The old man had to be able to do something!


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