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Taking a Chocolate Dip

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You skim your finger across the surface of the milky brown pool until its tip is covered in the thick sweet-smelling goo. Your curiosity gets the better of you and you stick your finger in your mouth, sucking it clean.

It definitely tastes like chocolate. Why would someone fill an entire pool with chocolate syrup? And more importantly, where was that someone?

You look around the room some more. There are columns, storage cabinets and murals along the wall, but no other doors save the one you came through. You look back at the pool. The chocolate tasted so nice, and the pool seems to beckon you to take a dip. A smile crosses your face.

You walk back into the small towel room to disrobe. After folding your clothes in a neat pile and placing them in one of the locker-sized cabinets, you pad across the pool hall nude.

You stand at the threshold of the pool staircase, gazing at the sea of chocolate before you. You take one step, then another. At the fourth step your left foot encounters the syrup. You feel it ooze between your toes, and then take another step. Now you're up to your ankles. You continue slowly, feeling the soft chocolate slide across your skin. It feels warm and relaxing.

You wade in further, and now you feel the chocolate invading your intimate regions. You shiver momentarily, but you keep walking. Your waist, your breasts, and your shoulders are swallowed by the thick syrup one by one. You can feel the weight of your long dark hair dragging across the surface behind you. Now in the deep end, you tread water--or tread chocolate, rather. It's a little difficult to swim around, as the chocolate is thicker than water, but you are able to stay afloat and slowly stroke your way across the pool.

You swim for a little while, then make your way back to the shallow end to relax. You find a spot in the shallow end that's low enough to sit down in while still keeping your neck above the water, and you sit down with your back to the pool's edge. You lift a completely chocolate-covered hand to your mouth and lick your fingers. It's absolutely delicious. You close your eyes and focus on the relaxing feeling of your pores being coated with the pool's chocolaty softness.


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