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Show's Over

added 14 years ago A

A girl in the crowd let out a shriek that was barely heard by anyone except those closest to her. A boy she had been dancing with was starting to look strange. His face was pushing outward and his lips and nose were darkening. The boy grabbed his face and felt it pushing out further. He pleaded for help over the music and pushed his way through the crowd toward the door they came in. Another boy yelled for help as a bulge formed in the back of his shorts. Then a girl groaned and fell to the ground. The crowd formed a small circle around her as they watched her shoes burst open and her foot stretching out.

Panic started to ripple through the crowd as other boys and girls started to change. The cheers of the crowd were replaced by screams and groans and the music suddenly stopped. Sussie, Alice, Beckie, and Kassie were startled by the sudden end of the music and the sound of the pleads for help coming from the crowd.

“What’s happening out there,” Sussie yells. “I don’t know, I can barely see,” Beckie calls back. Kassie screams as a hand reaches up onto the stage. It’s a boy who’s face is growing out into a muzzle and his ears are long and pointed. “Please, what’s happening. Help me. HAWP MEEE HAW HEE HAW.” The boy’s hands start to darken and fur grow up his arms. The girls all huddle together and watch as his hand forms into a hoof and he slides off the stage back into the crowd. Another girl in the crowd called out, “help me! Why?! Why is ttt HAW HEE HAW.” More and more brays came from the crowd and a smell started to fill the bar.

Kassie lifted her muzzle and puked on the stage and then the curtain came down. The girls helped Kassie to her feet and ran back stage. “Oh my god, what’s going on, what is this place,” Alice cried. “I don’t know but we have to get out of here before that happens to us,” Beckie screams. Then, the ponygirl walks in. “Well, how did you girls like your first show?”


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