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Evil Merman (Newer Version)

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You are now a merman. You and your friend went to the ocean. You find a black coral crown. You put it on. Later that day, you can't get it on. Then a red peral on it starts to glow. Your mind is saying keep it on, it's cool. You listen to it. When you are asleep two peices of coral extend down and touch both of your eyes. Then the coral surround your eyes but you don't wake up. In the morning you look in the mirror. You see your eyes slightly black insted of blue, and you see the claw that sunk into your skin black and your freckles are black, not blue. You listen to your mind which was saying nothing is wrong, it's just a merman thing. The next day you look at your shorts. They are different. They have D.E. in the corner, you ignore it like your mind tells you too. You get into the ocean. You look at your tail that used to be blue. Now it's black. Your necklace is also black, but you never changed it. You feel a pain in your head. You touch the spot that hurts. You feel 3 peices of coral in your head. The coral is already halfway to your skull. Your mind told you it's cool and after this you will be powerful. The next day you go and look in the mirror to look at the crown. You notice you still have gills but you are not a merman. You stay home from school, and it's a good thing you live by yourself. The coral is now 3/4 on the way to the skull. It is getting ready to attack it, but you dont know that. On the fourth day, You wake up and feel taller. You are. You also have more muscles, and you are shirtless. You try to put a shirt on but your mind wouldn't let you. You also see that your crown is bigger than it was before. Now the coral attacked your skull and now your skull is made out of coral. Now it is on its way to the brain.There is only 3 more days until it controlls your brain too, just like it controlls your mind. The next day you wake up. You look at your legs. They have pointy, black merman scales all over them. The back of your legs are covered in big red spikes.You get in the ocean. Your tail, just like your legs have sharp scales on them with red spikes on the side. You also have no shoes on. The coral crown is still on. The coral in your head is 1/4 on the way to the brain. On day 6, you wake up. You feel more evil than before. In the mirror, you see you have black on the outside, and red on the inside pointy ears. Your eyes are even a darker black. Your flat hair are now long pointy spiked up hair, with the bottom of them being back and the top red. Your finger nails are now very sharp. Your mind tells you it's okay just one more day. The coral are almost to the brain. It hurts even more now. You decide to go to sleep. The coral that is controlling your mind has you sleep for a day. You wake up. Their is a tremendous amount of pain in your back. You look at the mirror. The old smooth, and blue ridges and fins are now red and sharp. Continued.


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