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CYOTF (Human)

Now This is More Like It

added by Thomas 14 years ago BM S

Jack opened his eyes once the light died down. His entire apartment had changed! Gone was the crummy two bedroom shack he was accustomed to. In its place was a large penthouse-sized apartment. In fact, the room he was standing in now was bigger than his entire apartment just a few moments ago.

Looking down, Jack noticed how his physique had changed, also. Before, he was relatively skinny, though he kept in shape. Now, he had to weigh around 270 pounds, his shoulders like goalposts, it seemed. Jack walked over to the nearest mirror he found and admired his new, extremely buff body. His jaw dropped when he saw his 21 inch biceps.

"Oh, my God!" Jack thought to himself, looking down at the PDA in his hands. "It worked! This thing actually worked!" He put the device down and walked around his "new" apartment building.

He had a pretty good view of the city, as he apparently lived close to the top floor of the building. There were two large couches spread out in the middle of the living room. Each had to cost around $2,000, Jack thought, as he walked towards his bedroom.

He now had a king-sized bed, with a king-sized bedroom to go along with it. A few painting hung on the far side of the room, while a half dozen plaques sat in a nearby trophy case. He walked over to get a closer look at them.

Jack was apparently a former football player, as most of the trophies congratulated him on winning a few MVP awards, along with various humanitarian awards he had won on behalf of his city.

"Habitat for Humanity," Jack mumbled, as he read the various plaques. "Humane Society." "AIDS Research."

"All at 20 years of age," Jack said afterward, smiling at his various accomplishments. "I wonder how much I'm worth now." After a little bit of digging, he discovered he had a bank account worth a little more than 20 million dollars. Jack was about to pass out.

Jack walks back to the living room and pick up the PDA again, placing it in his pants pocket. "There's no way I'm going anywhere without you," he said, smiling.

After a quick shower and breakfast, Jack got dressed and headed out, wondering how much differently he would be treated now.


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