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Hello Mister Wong

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The new exibit at the Wolphin Aquarium made the papers and stirred the city to see the biggest Goldfish in the world. The Ointment shop was no exception as Mister Wong remembered well the young thief and his greed.

A raining Thursday afternoon brought the now large crowds to see the exibit. It had been three weeks since Jon splashed into the main tank. The thin brain of the fish he became had a remarkable short memory. All past life and memories had been press into the smallest of corners.

As Jon swam about in mindless movements his sight spotted a friend. Inching close he was able to oggle one eye at Mister Wong. The man from the Ointment Shop had come to see him.

Jon pressed against the glass wall in fond hope of talking with his friend. Yet press as he did the two were unable to touch. As Jon held a still position near the glass Mister Wong took a sit of a potion and then put his hand near Jon's eye.

"Good Day young one, I see you have all the gold and riches you could spend for the rest of your life. Do we enjoy our self?" thoughts passed to Jon as his small brain understood the words.

Bubbles popped from Jon's mouth as the crowd laughed, and laughed.
Even then did Jon begin to realize his home and style of life. A sudden burst of speed and Jon swam quickly to the surface only to find he could not breathe the air.

The fact was now realized if only for a short while he was not the greedy youth he had been when entering that shop. Now he had all the gold he could use, since a Godfish has no use for anything but food.


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