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Getting a Feel for the Park

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Dean stops at looks back at the long boardwalk leading back down to the docks and all the little branches of alleys and walkways that from a river of young men having the time of their lives. “Well?” Dean leers at Sam who just sighs. “I’m not going to baby sit you, Dean, but we came here to find out why people who come here are never heard from again.”

Dean just laughs, “um isn’t it obvious? Look,” he points all around him, “this place has everything you could ever want.” Sam shakes his head, “everything YOU could ever want, but I want more than sex and beer.” Dean sighs, “why do we always fight when we’re on vacation?” Sam can’t help but laugh, “I just want to look around and ask some questions, okay?” Dean lets out one big long groan at the thought, “fine, let’s go ask some questions.”

Sam and Dean wade through the ocean of young men laughing and drinking, many laughing to hard or to drunk to talk. The few that don’t shove them out of the way give their opinions of the island:

“Oh man, this place is the best, I got here this morning, and it’s been a blast.”

“Yeah, I got here in the early afternoon from up north, the boat trip was a couple hours long, but it was totally worth it.”

“I came here with some friends of mine, but when I got off one of the rides, they weren’t there, I guess they just ditched me, but who needs them.”

“I was nervous at first, but my friends were all having fun, so I just let go and joined in the fun.”

Sam thanks some college student as he takes with some of his friends. Dean walks over and leans up against one of the buildings. “Well that was a big waste of time,” Dean yawns, “we passed up all the beers and girls to learn that this place is fun.” Sam takes an aggressive step toward Dean.

“Dean, you know what? This place is perfect for you. Why do you go off and do whatever you want like everyone else.” Sam shoo’s Dean away, “go on, go on. Go make a jackass out of yourself.” Dean just laughs, “fine! I’m gone. If you need me, I’ll be knee deep in ladies.” Dean flips Sam off as he walks toward some of the red lights strung up on an alley.

Sam groans in frustration and storms off into the crowd.


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