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added by Dekul 20 years ago O

Before Andrew stood a goddess, a woman of such exquisite beauty that he could not even believe his eyes. She was perfect, long, slender, muscular legs, wide hips gently sloping into an impossibly slender waist, a tight, muscular torso, directly under a pair of huge, firm breasts, slender arms, and then as his vision cleared, he realized that it was not a human woman, for she was covered in shimmering black fur, and had the head of a horse. He nearly fainted at what he saw, but there was something about her, something in her deep blue eyes, that made him feel at ease. Andrew stuttered as he said, "He... Hello" The creature before him approached, slowly, and said, "Welcome, Andrew." He looked at her and said, "What's going on here, what is all this about?" She looked at him and said, "I have brought you here, I am Malah. I am not of this world but I am here as part of an expedition to explore the human race, I am studying emotional and physical feelings of human beings, to try to determine what it is that causes your race to be aggressive at this stage in development." Andrew just looked at her, trying to figure out what she meant. She continued, "It is uncommon for a race to maintain hostility beyond the first few years of it's nuclear age, races usually either wipe themselves out or advance to a more peaceful lifestyle, but yours has survived, Humans show quite an interesting character for races, an ability to adapt, survive, and an intelligence unlike any other race at this stage of development, it is likely that the humans could evolve far beyond any of the advanced cultures in the galaxy, but if your aggressive nature remains, this could pose a severe problem to the rest of the universe. I am part of a task force to determine whether or not the Human hostility can be overcome." Andrew looked at her for a few seconds, and said, "And if it can't?" She looked up away from him, but could not hide the look of sadness on her face, "We will be forced to destroy you." Andrew looked at her and said, "So, what am I doing here?" She looked at him and said, "Your name was drawn at random from a list we have generated of those we feel could handle the stress of what I have told you. You are part of my testing, you will have emotional responses invoked in your brain and I am here to watch the response. After this, you will be given a powerful physical stimulus, while I monitor your emotional response. Andrew looked at the creature before him as she closed her eyes and concentrated on him, his mind blanked out as he was buffeted by a broad range of emotion, from immense hatred to extreme happiness, from utter repulsion to impossibly powerful lust. He experienced extreme fear, and supreme cockyness. Then he was hit like a sledgehammer by the feeling of deep love. Suddenly, the feeling was lifted, like a plunger had sucked his heart dry, he keeled over and gasped for breath. He finally was able to ask, "Is it over?" She looked at him and said, "Not quite, I have gathered your emotional responses, and from what I have seen in this test, there may be hope for the human race yet, your emotion of love, I noticed, was many times stronger than your emotion of hatred. But now, I must measure your response to physical stimulus, I know you are already experiencing lust, much more than normal for a teenaged human, so I will build on that emotion." With that, she approached him, he finally figured out what she meant, and a great anticipation grew, he looked up at her as she came within an arms length, and she said.......


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