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Chronivac Version 4.0

CONTINUE

added 12 years ago O

CONTINUE, Tony waddled up to Sean, "Hey, Sean, Are you going to watch my first sumo match tonight?"

"Front row, Tone."
"Cool!"

Sean went to the first bout Tony walked up to his opponent, and dropped over dead. Sean heard that night that doctors found a heart defect six months ago, and had told him that he needed to loose 50 pounds, so that they could preform corrective surgery, but instead, coaches, family and friends helped him GAIN 50 pounds!

Sean cried, he could have let Tony be on the football team as a linebacker, and he could have the QB, But no, Sean had to be the solo shining star!

Sean looked at advanced features... Premonitions...send related to event:

Sean typed in Tony's death due to my changing him! He hit Send!
Sean saw the Warning message, something must was been wrong.

under the warning, there were two buttons continue, and CANCEL

Sean saw Tony screaming at him I'm dead, You killed me! My doctors Said LOOSE Weight, so I could get my heart fixed, but, NO, YOU helped me gain weight!

Sean selected CANCEL, Sean pulled up Tony's stat's and fixed his heart.


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