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It began when I made her clothes disappear

The Ultimate Man

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As he reached his climax and his now huge erect 15 inch member exploded with manly pleasure, he roared with power. Then he shouted "I want to become the ultimate man!" and he looked at the ring on his finger and yelled, "I wish..."

"...I was the ultimate man!"

Butch stood there, glaring at me as he pumped out the last spurts from his orgasm.

Butch began to grow. His clothing gave up and shredded during his transformation. His body became extremely muscular and he grew taller. He became a seven-foot tall hulk of a man, with muscles that were almost freakish. His cock did not change, but his balls grew to the size of large hen’s eggs.

Butch laughed cruelly as he saw the power filling his body.

His face sprouted a thick full black beard and it grew out to medium length and was perfect and beautiful. His body became covered in dense hair. His chest was a dense black mat of hair and hair grew on his back. His skin became perfect; not a single scar, mole or blemish and his eyes became an ice blue. Butch liked to fight and had to have one of his front teeth replaced by a gold tooth, but as he smiled at me, knowing how truly Godlike he had become, I saw that all of his formerly crooked and damaged teeth had become ivory white, even and well proportioned. In short, Butch had just wished for the perfect male body; his physical form was that of the perfected human male and his mind filled with sexual techniques that would please any woman...

Then, something happened to Butch that he hadn't expected. In asking to be the ultimate man, there were things he received that were not merely physical.

Butch's mind became that of the highest order of genius and not just in one field of study, but in ALL of them. Butch's heart became that of the most compassionate, kindly man living and the old Butch, screaming in his mind that he had been tricked, that he didn't want to be a nice guy, died away leaving the Ultimate Man, a man that embodies the very best qualities of manhood. Strength, loyalty, compassion, generosity, bravery, intelligence, responsibility, honor, courtesy, chivalry and many more intangibles that Butch the Bully could never have attained. Butch's eyes softened as he looked over at me. I sensed a change in him, but I had no idea what. He smiled warmly at me, then looked down at Amanda who was still licking his cock.

He looked into her eyes and said in the most beautiful bass voice, the kind of voice God Himself would use.

"I'm sorry, please stand." He said with a warm smile.

He gave Amada his hand and helped her up. He gently kissed it and apologized to her again for treating her like a prostitute and explained that the beast that had done that was no more. He was still Butch, but he was also the Ultimate Man.

He looked down at his naked body and wished for clothes to cover him. Immediately, he was wearing clothes like he had worn before they shredded; only they fit his impossibly huge frame.

"Forgive my nudity, please." He said gently to her.

Then he looked to me.

"I wish you to be fully healed of any ills or hurt." he said.

I felt my cracked ribs and bruised body heal immediately.

He walked over to me and offered me a hand up. I took it and he firmly, yet gently lifted me from the ground. He dusted me off and smiled.

"I'm sorry." He said, "But that Butch that hurt you is no more and you have no need to fear me."

He said it with such sincerity that I couldn't help but believe him.

"I guess you really do have to word your wishes carefully, but I'm glad the ignorant brute I was didn't. He as released the very best possible person he could have been by not understanding what Ultimate means." Butch chuckled.

"I believe this belongs to you." Butch said, taking off the ring and handing it to me.

He shook my hand and took Amanda's and kissed gently again. "I must go, I have a new life to build, but if you have need, I will do what I can to help." He smiled, turned and walked away.

I put the ring back on and looked at Amanda. She was looking after Butch with a dreamy expression on her face and then she murmured the words I dreaded the most, "Wow! He was like a knight in shining armor!"

I thought about it, indeed Butch now was the ideal man... and the worst competition I could possibly have in Amanda's heart!


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