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Looking the Part

added by Mtac 13 years ago BM

Cally decided that if she was going to be a sorority girl, she might as well look the part. The clothes were a start but there was no denying that she herself would seem somewhat... out of place in the company of so many attractive girls. She decided to rectify this and typed:

>>Cally is considered pretty, even compared to her sorority sisters

After hitting enter, she was surprised and a little worried when nothing changed this time. She was wondering what had gone wrong, when the sentence in the manual about making entries specific came to mind. Looking at the wording of her last command, she realized what had gone wrong. She had typed that she was considered attractive, not that she actually was attractive. So instead of changing herself, she instead changed other people's opinion's of her. That was easily fixed though. Her next command she took no chances and typed:

>>Cally is an attractive girl, and is one of the prettier girls in her sorority.

This time when she hit enter she felt a small surge of something like static electricity hit her body. She felt a slight sensation of vertigo as her body stretched out another few inches. She felt her shirt tightening and looked down and saw her breasts inflating underneath the pink fabric. From the similar sensations from her hips and rear she guessed that they were expanding too. As soon as the sensations stopped, she ran over to her full body mirror. What she saw delighted her. It was still her, just a much more attractive her. Her face was stunning with full lips and a perfect smile. She even had dimples now. Her shirt hugged every curve, highlighting a thin waist, flat stomach and firm breasts. She turned, and saw her sweatpants were stretched tight across her shapely backside. She rolled up her pant legs and saw that her legs had improved too, thickening a bit, but much more toned and shapely. She'd definitely fit in now.

Now that she looked the part, she decided it was time to make her grand entrance. Vicky had said she was scheduled to move in next month, but there was no reason she couldn't move the date up a bit. Choosing her words very carefully, she entered:

>>Cally lives at the phi-kappa-nu sorority house. Everyone there knows her and likes her. When she hits enter, she will be transported along with all her belongings to her room in the house. Everyone will think that Cally being there is completely normal and will remember that she moved in at the start of the semester

She paused for a second before taking a deep breath and pressing enter. This time the world seemed to spin, her vision blurring for a second before everything came back into focus and she found herself standing in her room. Or at least it was like her room, in the same way that her new body was like the old one. It was mostly the same, just nicer, and pinker, with photos of girls she'd never seen before on her wall, most of them wearing sorority clothing. Looking out her window, she found herself staring at her old dorm building, at her old window, where she saw a stranger moving around. That made her jump for a second until she looked around and saw the box of artifacts on her desk and her computer on her desk and she breathed easy.

She looked around with a satisfied smile. She had arrived...


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