Mellony crawled out, soaking wet, and very mad at Brad.
She was so mad, so distracted by her anger, that she didn't feel her changes.
"Real mature Brad," she said, as horns grew from her forehead "you ruined my dress." a long, arrow-tipped tail burst from the back "I hope you're happy!" a pair of large bat wings bursts from her back "You even ruined my shoes!" she said, as she stepped out of them to reveal sharp, black claws on her feet "You owe me a new pair!" she said, pointing at him, her fingers now ending in sharp, black claws.
"Uhh.. Mellony.. you.." Brad stammered as her eye whites went black with yellow irises and slit pupils.
"I what?" she asked irritated, as her teeth became sharp, her ears got long and poined, breasts grew larger, hips grew wider, and her skin turned red, completing her transformation.
"WELL?!?!" she asked.
"You're right," Brad said "I'm stupid, Chuck's stupid, we're both stupid, and we're both very, very, VERY sorry, right Chuck?"
"Yeah," Chuck agreed, scared out of his mind "it won't happen again! Please don't hurt us!"
"Hurt you?" she asked, confused, but still mad "What are you talking about?"
"You just became a succubus!!" Chuck said.
"Now Chuck," Brad said, putting his hand on Chuck's shoulder "just because she's as mad as Hades, and she has every right to be, doesn't give you the right to say such things about her!"
"But she IS!!!" Chuck insisted.
"No she's not." Brad said, giving Chuck a look that told him not to say it anymore even though it was true "She's just really mad, and she's VERY beautiful, RIGHT?"
"Um yes," Chuck said, catching on "I agree - she's very beautiful, and anyone who can't see it has a deathwish - I mean - is blind - really blind - really, REALLY blind, and stupid!"
"Ok you two," she asked, "what's going on? Tell me right now!!!"
"Well," Brad stared "I love you - that's it."
She gave him an "I'm not buying it." look.
"Can you excuse us for a minuet?" Brad asked "Chuck and I need to talk."
"Fine," she said "but be quick - I'm wet, mad, and I wanna go home!"
The 2 boys turned and talked quietly to eachother, but what they failed to realize she could hear every word with her long, pointy ears!
"What are we gonna do, Brad?" Chuck asked "Her parents will FREAK!!"
"I'm driving her home," Brad told him "so let ME worry about it!"
"But what if she starts craving our fleash?" Chuck asked "I'm not riding with a demon - she'll eat my soul!"
"She doesn't know she's become a succubus," Brad replied "and since it's my fault, I'm waiting for the right time to break it to her gently."
"Before or AFTER her parents see her?" Chuck asked "She won't make it 5 minuets before they notice those, horns, wings, and tail."
At hearing this, she felt her horns, wings and tail, then looked and saw her relection in the water.
She jumped back in shock, but then looked again at what she had become, and was stating to like it.
Then she looked back at the 2 boys. "I wouldn't want to eat them anyway." she thought to herself "Their idiocy and immaturity would give me indigetion. I'll let them think they're keeping me in the dark for NOW, and wait until I'm alone with Brad. I won't kill him - he's probably the only guy who'll accept me like this, and besides, there are SO many things worse than death, which would not be good enough punishment for him anyway. It's sweet how he's trying to make things right, but I won't let him off the hook either - oh yeah, I'm gonna have fun with this!"
"Ok Brad," she asid "I accept your appology, but could you please drop Chuck off back at his place? I'd like some 'me-and-you' time."
"Ok babe," he said.
So they all got in: Brad drove, Mellony sat next to him, and Chuck rode beind Brad.
While they rode, Mellony give Chuck an evil grin, flicking her black, forked tongue at him, then turned towards Brad, telling him how skinny his friend was - how he needed to put more meat on his bones, and this made Chuck turn pale.
So they dropped him off at his house, and he ran inside to find his Bible, and he slept with it.
"What got into HIM?" Mellony asked Brad, even though she knew.
"He just gets scared when a girl gets mad at him," he lied "that's all. Now to take you back home."
"Not yet." she said, grinning evily "The night's not over - I wanna have more FUN with you, so let's go to your place."
When they got there, they got out.
"You look more beautiful than the stars." he said.
"Thanks," she said, grinning evily "but why don't we take a closer look at them?"
With that, she grabbed him, and flew into the sky until they were miles high, but not so high the air was too thin - just enough to scare him bad!
"So when were you planning on telling me, Bradly?"
"People are gonna see up your dress!" he said, scared.
"Let them look," she smiled "I'd welcome it, and don't try to change the subect - I'm a succubus, right?"
"Yes," he said "but you're still beautiful - please don't kill me - I didn't know that would happen. We should tell the water company before anyone drinks it!"
"Acctully," she said smiling evily "I think I like the idea of a whole city of demons - then noone will freak if they see me because they'll all be like me! Don't worry - I promise not to kill you - I love you, so why don't you buy me some after-prom dinner?"
"Okay." he said.
"Good," she asid smiling wickedly "and be sure to order tap-water for yourself - I wanna see YOU change too - it's only fair, and we'll make the perfect demon couple. And ask the waiter to not cook the meat - I want it raw!!"
So she flew them to a nice restaurant, with some patrons who'd already drank the infected water, and become demons themselves.
"Looks like I won't stand out as much," she said, frowing a bit "So after dinner, buy me a black bikkini and a black coller with spikes - I wanna go with this look, ok?"
"Yes." he said, scared.
She kissed him on the cheek - it felt hot.
What will he do now?