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Luckily the Hay broke your fall

added by PeaNutt Buta 20 years ago O

When you jump into the mirror, you feel like you are free falling. You open your eyes and see the ground is far below you and you scream as you land with a large THUD!

"Luckily this Hay broke our fall," Sarah grinned as you sat up next to her.

The stench of the place caught your attention first. "Gross!"

"Where's Jack?" Sarah asked quickly.

"Who cares? Where are we?" You ask.

"We seem to be in Lamnor, though I can't tell what land. We should be close to Lamlorn," Jack said quickly.

"Where are you Jack?" Sarah asked, looking for where his voice was coming from.

"I'm over here, stuck on this pole. I think we should get out of here. I don't think many farmers like trespassers," Jack attempted to rush them.

There he was, pinned to one of the columns supporting the barn. Some sort of metal piece was holding him there. "How do we get you down?" You ask.

"Well, I suppose you could bend the metal ...and I'd just slip off," Jack said.

"You mean like this?" You say as you bent the metal with little resistance.

"WHA!" Jack yelled before hitting the ground face first. "Well, that could've gone so much better," Jack groaned.

You helped pick him up as Sarah looked at Jack more carefully. "Where's the bag?" She asked.

"It's right..." His voice drifted off as he searched himself and the area. "I must've dropped it. We need to find it. It's doubtful we'll get through this place without it.

Just then, a voice arose from outside, "Who's in there!?"

You all froze.

The voice came again, just as horrible and grouchy as before, "I know your in there. If you don't come out right now, I'll make sure you don't ever come out again.

"We better hide," You say quickly.

"We should go out there, he already knows we're in here," Sarah said quickly.

"But we need the bag. If he lets us leave, we won't get another chance to get the bag," Jack said.

"Forget the bag, what about the farmer?" Sarah asked.

"What's he going to do? Poke us to death? I still say hiding is our best choice," You say.

"What do you think Jack?" Sarah asked.

Jack began to think before he made up his mind. He decided to...


What do you do now?


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