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Chronivac Version 4.0

In the Garden of Jeff

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Jeff pondered his options, but then a fly come buzzing by his ear, and he swat it, unintentionally pressing enter on the keyboard. The fly flew away as Jeff saw the machine beginning the process, the input for time and space where blank so he expected to either do nothing or come up as an error, but to his surprise the process didn't appear to show problem. To even more of surprise the machine actually works. Your surrounding start to morph, your bedroom, bed, desk and floor began to sprout weed and grass, your walls and ceiling disolve into nothingness and altought it was past noon the sun is brightly shining in the middle of a quite idilic blue sky.

The birds sing and a squirrel painless climbed to Jeff's hands, and that's when he noticed his clothes had vanish. Jeff panicked and looked around he was naked in quite the luscious forest, the air was warm, and a fine breeze cool over all his exposed skin. The ground was soft and the animals friendly. Where the heck did he ended up? Remembering the Chronivac was supposed to be with him he looked around for his computer, but all he saw was a puddle of crystal clear water where his computer was supposed to be.

Something shone in the water and Jeff got on his knees to take a closer look, thery're letters that read:

UNSTABLE TIME PERIOD
WARNING: Changes in history will change main timeline
INPUT UNAVAILABLE
RESET TO LAST POINT IN: 00:58:42

The countdown had already begun, Jeff was stuck wherever, and whenever, he was for at least an hour.

Seeing no point in staying there for now, he went to explore, and see where he had ended up. On his way he notice the place was crawling with fruit trees all ripe and ready, and animals like boars, gophers and some hares and lizards, were perfectly comfortable walking by him. He thought he saw a buck and a zebra, but he probably just confused the zebra. After a while he forgot about being naked, and was content eating the sweetest mango he had ever tasted, after a while he heard a hum, a human hum. He aproached carefully until he saw a man and a woman, both very naked, The woman was beautiful thing, Jeff couldn't take his eyes off of her she was combing her hair with her fingers and made Jeff pop a stiffy, suddenly recovering his modesty shame. The man by his side was handsome and muscular, had to admit, and made Jeff even more selfconcious, seeing how they were the same "size" even when Jeff was already engorged thanks to the woman.

Jeff suddenly had a moment of realization, he was in an idillic place, with friendly animals, not a single construction or human in sight, save those two and all of them were naked. But, he couldn't trully be...

"Adam look what I have here." said the woman, not in english and not in any language Jeff had ever heard, but he understood it. Come to realize it, The characters in the pond weren't english either, they weren't even characters, They were ripples in the pond. Jeff saw that the woman who called for the guy named Adam was holding a fruit. He couldn't denied anymore, he was in Eden and those were Adam and Eve... and if that was true they were about to do the single worst thing humanity would ever do. Almost not thinking Jeff dash trying to prevent it. Unlucky for him he has less than a minute before warping back.


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