(Some things are changed form here on; minor things I disagree on how to write a story, and plain personal preference. The changes: From 1st person narrative to 3rd person narrative; then Bart's name changes to Baen, Bart is short for Bartholomew, Baen is short and Scottish [Bart just reminds me of the show and is distracting]; some details on each character physical appearance will be included. Enjoy!)
While all four guys enjoyed themselves, drinking their 3rd round of beer, laughing, Eric, our main b-day guy, focused on his Chronivac apparatus. As he clicked buttons to fugrue them out, the rest of the guys looked at him attentively for their changes to start. Then, the real party would start to who knows what outcome. A screen blinks like a compact laptop, the following shows the screen of the Chronivac 4.0 info of all the guys in the birthday party.
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= Total subjects in radius for manipulation: 4 men.
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= Owner: Eric,23 year old white male,brunette with clear green eyes. Slightly muscular built of buffer jogger, weights 158 lbs.
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= Sitting at a couch, 2 males:
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= Baen, 25 year old Scottish male, black hair, icy blue eyes, slim muscular build of a swimmer, weights 164 lbs.
= Johan, 24 year old American male, dark brown hair, light hazel eyes, tanned skin, decent slim muscular build of a jogger, weights 156 lbs. Tattoed with 2 even thinly black line all = around his arm, between his deltoids and upper bicep, on both arms.
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= Detecting one last male at adjacent sofa:
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= Ricardo, 24 year old Cuban male, olive toned skin, blond, with deep green eyes, muscular slim body, weights 160 lbs.
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"So, are going to see something happen today? Or should we keep drinking till we all pass out?", A cocky Ricardo blurts out after a sip form his canned bear.
Johan laughts and Baen snorts out a bit in the middle of taking a sip of beer. "True, Baen and me been waiting too!", says Johan joining in, "Is the bonner permanent then or that's it for tonight?". Baen punches Johan on the shoulder in laughter, "True true, Nothing aintn happening till now."
"Hold on hold guys! I just got this in less than one minute. Give me a sec, okay!", Eric joined in in laughter form the beer buz.
Within Eric's thoughts, he wondered at first glace the merging option as the best one. He'd definitely merge the guys, to form quite the guy; best of all traits in one person. Already there were mixed feelings on who should he be with, but merging them would make even better. He wouldn't choose, and get a better broh out of it. Though the machine only recommended 2 people merging at a time, any more would be problematic as it stated carefully. Whatever "problematic" meant, it was a decision to he had to make.
Eric could merge one of friends with another, then see if he liked the outcome to continue. But who should go first? Ricardo was an avid gym guy who could merge with Baen as a swimmer. Yet, Baen's body with Johan's would be a great turn out also; then there's last for Ricardo and Johan. Or if he couldn't decided between them, he could merge himself with one of his best buds.