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Escape from the pool!

added by TheLordofNyrin 8 years ago BM S

You don't want stop having pressure in you released, but you need to escape before you melt away and merge with this pool! If you could just move, you might have a chance at escape. You try to locate the surface of the pool to get out of this molten nightmare, but you can not even tell which way is up.

Your body is starting to melt more quickly the longer you stay and you are running out of options. You feel like your melting much faster than you should. Your starting to lose your details on your body, your toes have melded together as have your fingers, and your limbs are starting to deform. Your mass is melting away so your getting lighter, this is your chance to flee!

You try to move towards the surface, but it feels like the pool is just holding you in place; your too malleable and your semi solid form is struggling to move but you are making progress.

Its taking a lot of effort to move yourself as the melting saps your strength. Your arms, legs and head are starting to lose their shape but you try to move again, you NEED to escape. This time you are finding it easier to move, so you keep trying. Your starting to move in the direction you think is the surface faster now but now you are just too soft malleable to make any real haste. The melting and you struggling to move is starting to misshape your body and you are losing your form. You try one more time to move your arms and your legs and you can move much easier than you did before. Your starting to fight your way to what you think is the surface - the weight of the syrup is getting lighter. Your form is melting away faster now and you look like a blob kind of in the shape of a person. Desperate to flee from the pools snare you swim as fast as your molten blobby-like arms and legs can carry you.

Your form no longer resembles a person but instead is a semi-molten shapeless blob. Your running out of time but your perseverance pays off as you burst out of the top of the pool. You can see the shore of the pool only feet away from you but you are almost entirely melted now. You make a mad dash for the shore and with only moments to spare before you melt completely into the pool, you manage climb out of the chocolate syrup with the last bit of strength. Your melting body flops lazily on the shore in an unrecognizable lump of chocolate nearly melted chocolate and tired. You regret coming here, and with all of your strength gone, you cannot focus. You pass out due to pure exhaustion.

When you wake up, you find that...


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