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At the bottom of the pool

added by TheLordofNyrin 8 years ago BM S

Your massive body is picking up more and more mass. Your feel as big as a car and the pressure you’re experiencing is making you feel like you’re going to burst! You continue to panic until you feel your backside hit the bottom of the pool with a ‘thud’. You’ve sunken all the way to the bottom. That chocolate woman is nowhere to be found.

Your body is still sucking in more of the chocolate; you can’t stop absorbing this pool. You try to scream without a mouth you struggle to move your arms, you try to anything to get out of your situation. You’re getting as big as a house. The pressure in you has gotten unimaginatively bad; all of this inflation is starting to overload your as inability as chocolate to sense pain.

You rest at the bottom of the pool, you would cry if your eyes would make tears. Your ass has gotten so big that it should have its own area code. You suddenly can feel the surface of the pool drain past you as your massive chocolate blob of a body sucks the last drops of the chocolate syrup into you.

You will never find that strange woman now. You must have eaten her along with the rest of the pool. You lie on the concrete bottom of the now drained pool, chocolate tears streaming from your eyes. You don’t even get relief from crying as the tears sucked back into your face as fast as you make them. You must be at least 30 feet wide at least and weigh 40 tons; you’re hogging the entire bottom of the pool. You don’t even look human anymore because of how swollen as you are. Resting on your back you look up can see sky, but you must be at least 20 feet down. There is no way you can climb out of this basin. The walls are sheer concrete.

You wish this was all a bad dream and are starting to hate chocolate. Its all you can taste, all you can smell, and it ruined your life. You hear your mind screaming, "I'll never eat chocolate again! Just please! Anyone! Get me out of this! It hurts so much!" You’re in extreme pain from all of the inflation; you need to find relief soon.


What do you do now?


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