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You manage to escape but only just!

added by TheLordofNyrin 8 years ago BM

Your plan is working! Your body is slowly starting to shrink back down to normal size! You can just barely walk, but if you can get out of this chocolate liquid you might have a real chance at escape. You take a few steps but are struggling to keep your balance. You continue to march your way to the shore of the shallow end. The pool is almost 6 feet deep now and liquid chocolate is still pouring from your ass.

Your progress is slowing down; it feels like something is pulling at your legs. You look down and are mortified to see several melted chocolate people pulling you back into the pool. You start to run for the shallow end, the pool is about 9 feet deep now. Your fear makes you break into a sprint and causes you to trip into the chocolate syrup. It takes all of your focus not to let yourself start absorbing the chocolate again. You must keep focusing on shitting it out!

You look up to see the strange chocolate woman leaning over you, she starts to reach down for your face but you struggle to get away from her and kick her in the chest away from you as she splats against the side of the pool. The pool is starting to get very deep, but your almost free! The chocolate demons grabbing at your legs are making it extremely hard to move. In your head you can hear them saying “Don’t leave… Stay with us…”. their mental voices echo through your head. "These must be all of the victims this chocolate has claimed... And that woman must be their leader" you think to yourself, but there is nothing you can do for them. They are trying to drag you back into the brown goo, and you need to escape. You do not dare dally as that chocolate woman will not give you a second chance! The chocolate arms and legs pulling at you are starting to overwhelm you and are beginning to drag you back into the pool. You have to make this last great push but you wont make it. You decide to jump for the edge. You kick the chocolate servants of the pools arms and legs away from you for a brief moment, and jump. You land right on the edge of the pool clinging on to it for dear life. The chocolate people are pulling you back in as hard as they can but you manage to haul yourself out of the pool only just.

You turn around and see their molten chocolate bodies sink back into the pool, and that chocolate woman is standing on top of the pool, looking at you. You expect to see her outraged by your escape but she doesn’t look angry… or sad...

She looks happy…

You stop for a moment to think to to yourself “Why are you happy?”

She stares back at you without answering.

You stare back into her soulless chocolate eyes for a long extended moment and feel a real connection with this strange woman. Her expression smiling back at you and you can feel yourself smiling back.She clearly does not wish for you to leave, but you know she is naturally happy.

You feel ashamed you aren't going to stay for a moment but snap back to your decision to leave. "I will not let you ensare me devil!" She stares back and smiles at you, making you feel ashamed you said such a harsh thing. You try to say your sorry but she waves a last goodbye to you and then sinks back into chocolate pool. You suddenly feel dizzy and black out.

You wake up in your bed back in your room. You still have 4 more days to stay at this resort. You shudder thinking it was all a very bad dream. You look back to see if the pool outside your room is still filled with chocolate, but it’s a normal pool. Your far too scared to see if its real so you stay inside.

That chocolate woman still haunts you, her blank soulless chocolate eyes call to you and you start to feel sad that you left her. Your experience with her was unlike anything you’ve ever had. You then shudder remembering how creepy the whole thing was and you try to shake off the whole thing saying “It was just a dream”. But you then think to yourself “But it didn’t feel like a dream… It was far too real…”
In an attempt to help settle your nerves you go look at yourself in the mirror, you assure yourself that it was in fact a dream. “When I look in the mirror, I will be a normal woman, and not made of chocolate.”

You walk into the bathroom and when you stare into the mirror you see…


What do you do now?


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