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You escape from the candy store and run out into the shopping mall

added by TheLordofNyrin 7 years ago O

The baker laughs at you as you try to explore yourself as best you can to see what all has changed, you quickly find out you can move again and without even speaking to the baker, make a dash for the nearest exit, sprinting into the storefront and startling several customers. You want to say something to them and start to talk to them as your just as confused as they are “Umm uhh, I...” Your voice is very high pitched and makes you sound adorable, you have no idea how to explain your situation, your mind is racing from the events today.

You then hear the baker scream “Hey! Get back here!” and he takes a ladle off of the kitchen shelf and chases after you.

You can find out more about what you are and what you can do with your new form later; you need to get out of here, now! You push your way past several store patrons as they gawk and gasp in disbelief and confusion as a little chocolate angel kid bolts out of the store, and into the busy shopping mall.

You look around to see where to go but you don’t have long, there’s a huge department store not that far away to your right and you’re up on the 4th floor of this massive shopping mall. The halls are narrow, you could try to run and hide in the store but the baker is coming quickly and people are staring at you.

The baker grabs some kind of special powder and a dust sprayer. You see it and think it can’t be good to get hit with that and he will catch you if you don’t act fast, but you already know what to do to get away. As he gets out of the store and readies his device to stun you, he and several dozen people see you leap from the 4th story balcony, spread your wings, and you fly away.

The mall erupts into panic as your chocolate angelic form soars through the halls, people scream and gasp, dropping their bags as you fly by startling them. You don’t know how long your body will last like this but it seems to be holding up perfectly fine, it’s more surprising that you able able to fly so well without knowing how and your wings didn’t snap off when you leapt.

You have no idea where to go, but you can see hundreds of shops here for just about anything and everything. This is a massive mall. It’s Valentine’s Day, there’s still some snow outside and it’s below 40 degrees, you could try to run for the outside world, or you could try to hide in one of the many stores from the public freaking out, there's also a series of apartments or offices, or possibly hotel rooms of some kind on the upper 8 floors and some support rafters above those holding up a glass ceiling, you could try to go up there to get away from the crowd and see what those higher levels are.

You need to think fast as you’re causing quite a ruckus down below; managed to escape the baker, but what are you going to do now? You’re made entirely out of milk chocolate and look like a 13 year old angel now.

(Special note for future writers: because this is in a massive shopping mall I cannot write down a branch for every single possible store you could go to or scenario for further chapters or the events that follow. If you want to take this story in a specific direction or into a specific store like a candle or sex shop, feel free to write your own story branch from here. You don't have to use the ones i listed :D)


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