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Missing 14 year old Jane the Snake

added by Anonymous 5 years ago A AR O

(Well the Jane thread started 10 years ago,the In Store Demo was
6 years ago and this new ones dated Dec 31 2017,,soooo)

It had been 16 years since her old sister Jane had vanished
and Isabel,once 10 back in 2001
was now a young professional executive of a financial
firm and was
26 now.

Her parents had left the apartment empty these last 16 years

tormented by the vanishing of Isabels older daughter.

They had planned to sell the partment haunted
by happier times,

but Isabel,now a upcoming star in the financial world
had purchased the place
from her parents.

So when Isabel came to the apartment door she
was shocked to find the door open
and the lights on.

A fairly major thing since
the apartment had
lain closed
and dark these last 16 years.

Isabel considered exiting and calling the police to report
a intruder
but thought better of it
and quietly
tiptoed into the apartment.Her weighted purse held at the ready
in case some crazed
ophiod addict attacked her.

Then she entered the dusty living room and nearly
screamed,for there
on the sofa lay her long missing sisters clothes
with a pit viper snake nestled in them,sleeping.

Isabel quietly tiptoed to a nearby arm chair and sat in it
staring at the snake wearing her
long lost sisters clothes.

Isabels IPhone beeped midnight 12 times
and as Midnight came and
went
Isabel observed the snake
begin to change and expand,till
stretched out on the sofa lay Isabels now
younger sister Jane

now still 14 years old and sleeping.

Jane SHOULD have been 30 years old,but wasn't a day older then the
day she vanished.


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