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The Haunted Puppeteer Needle

added by The 1 5 years ago I S Mythological Magic

Nat and Sera turned around to see a giant needle floating in the air as if it was possessed. The metal needle was as big as a adult sized man and it had a thread hanging from it's hole.

"What the heck is that thing?!" Nat exclaimed.

In the blink of an eye, the needle was in front of Nat. The possessed needle lashed out and struck Nat in the left arm.

Nat braced herself for the pain, but instead she felt nothing.

The needle went back a few feet in front of the group.

Nat looked down at her left arm to see that it's no longer made of living stone. It's now a stuffed doll version of it's former self. It's a lot puffyer now that it's made of cotton and cloth. The needle somehow turned her left arm into a stuffed toy arm!

"You jerk!" Nat shouted in outrage. How many times is she going to get transformed in this crazy place!

Nat did a little experimenting and found that she can move the stuffed arm just fine. She's a little sad to see that her new arm wasn't made to hold things.

She prepared a fire spell with her left arm. But as she summoned the fire ball, she felt a shearing pain as her stuffed arm caught on fire!

The fire spell dissipated as Nat focused on waving her doll arm around to put out the fire.

When the fire was gone, she found herself surprised that she could feel through her new stuffed doll arm.

While Nat was focusing on her arm, the possessed giant needle raced awards Nate again.

But before it could further transform Nat into a stuffed doll, a lighting spell struck the floating needle dead on. It flew into a wall.

Sera was standing behind Nat with her arms outstretched. Casting a lighting spell is a piece of cake for her.

"Look girlie. If you don't like being transformed, I can change you back into a cloud girl after the battle is over. But keep in mind, whatever corruption or magic has been cast on you will still be there. You're body will transform back into what it was without proper purification treatment." Sera offered.

"I'll take you up on that offer. Thanks Ilivir." Nat accepted. She still doesn't know that Ilivier is no longer in control...

The two girls faced off against the floating needle. It's possible that this monster is not the guardian. It might just be one of the gordian's minions.

Unknowest to Nat and Sera, the soul gem on the Halo of Purity glowed a bright red as Isaac's battle with the Hydra spirit waged on.

What happens next?

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Note: To be perfectly honest, I'm not really that experienced in fight scenes. I feel that other writers can do a better job then me when it comes to battles. So feel free to add what you think how the battles should go. That includes the hydra and Ilivir fight. I'm eager to see what others can think of. And for the record, I hope my writing is not discouraging others from adding new chapters. I just write for fun of it. But my writing is by no means perfect. I noticed that the story got a little messy lately thanks to me. But no need to sweat the little things. Mistakes can be corrected in a later chapter or in a alternate chapter. I've seen mistake made all the time so what makes me any different? Now that Isaac is awake, the story should be a little more focused now. I don't really have any grand plans for Dark Isaac and Sir Edenic right now. So don't be afraid to use those characters. Part of the fun is the unpredictability of bouncing off of other writers. It gives off a sense of adventure. I'll be waiting for the next chapter...

I'm not sure were this story path will go, but I'm willing to roll with whatever happens. I feel like I have been hogging the spotlight for far too long. Every writer needs a chance to improve and have fun.

Oh. And to prevent confusion, here's a list of the changes Nat currently has:

-Dragon eyes.
-Purple air dragon scales on the cheeks.
-Right arm is made of living stone.
-Left arm is that of a living stuff doll.
- Left foot of a dust bunny.
-Fairy wings made of cloud vapor.

Everything else is that of a regular cloud girl.


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